When Dying Eyes Close
Sometimes when dawn spreads,
Her rosy fingertips
It bleaches upon a skeleton
Of a poet who sat too long
Through many cold and lonely nights
Only to die of a stroke
Sometimes when a bee flits past
To seek for a flower
It cuts its wing on the edge of a blade
That sunk deep in a woman’s neck
When a lover became an animal
Consumed by echoes of a dark cave
Sometimes when dew lasts
It finds the tale of a soldier
Who grew tired of a leading hand
That had threatened to shrivel his mind
Till he broke free and sought for a new truth
With a lot of cold upon his palm
Sometimes the promises of a new hello
Only waits for he who slept soundly dreaming
Of the river his house would stand by
Or of ripe corn splitting dry in the sun
Or how far away he would travel
If he could use her toe nails as units of currency
Clever! Beautiful! Tragic mixed with some romance ideals. And finally, just awesome!
Superb presentation of a tragic romance. Nice.
Please write again
This is good timmo.